Wednesday, 19 October 2016

A wild Adventure

As the sun shone in a beautiful cottage in South America's rain forest three healthy and strong gentleman lived there, the oldest one was Jono , second Max, and last Simon. They were all explorers looking for a tail told long ago that people sometimes said it was true. That’s why these men are in the Forest, they say the tail lives in a cave, this cave was the darkest and deadliest cave of them all. Here is a glimpse of what a man saw before suffering from having poison struck in him from the beast. “It was the darkest cave I have ever seen until I was attacked by a terrible fire dragon” and just like that the man was gone.

So that's why the explorers wanted to see it for themselves and maybe slay the beast if they got the chance. Now back to the story, As the explorers set out to find the cave they didn’t know it was going to be hard to find it, so they went up and down mountains through rivers until they found it Jono went first then Max, then Simon “ooooh that smell is disgusting” Simon said whilst holding his nose. Jono was noticing there was bones of people and animals all around.

Then at that moment when Jono was looking around he saw to red ferocious eyes staring at him then it moved closer and closer until you could see its whole body Simon ran behind max petrified of the dragon Jono carefully pealed out of his pocket is sharp blade gripping it tightly, Jono bolted at the dragon and stabbed it in the stomach, the dragon bursted out flames, Max and Simon helped cut the dragon until it died like a heap of ants taking on a weta. Then when Max did his last cut in the dragon. They could not believe it but the dragon fell to the ground, Jono glanced at the fellow explorers "we did it".

1 comment:

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