Thursday, 11 September 2014

Noah's Extension Writing

Once upon a time three ninja turtles lived in a forest and I don't mean any forest I mean old trees and scary vines covered with slime and a house. They had a swing and a tall tree that was filled with purple plums, Ben came out with smile he was the youngest brother it was nice and sunny, when Toby said “Ben we have been told that a snake has come into the forest” Ben said I will go get it, NO! you're not strong enough, Simon is more stronger than you, Ben groaned oh he went upstairs and went into his bedroom, he closed his window slowly so it wouldn't squeak just before he closed the next window he peeled a plum off the tree, after he climbed into bed turned the light off to go to sleep.

 In the morning “Toby said Ben come, were going to catch the snake” “okay I’ll come” zo. Ben went to the side and tried to distract the snake then it leaned forward, Ben yield “throw it” Toby through the spear at the snake but the snake dogged it, then Ben grabbed it’s neck “throw it again Toby” Toby chucked the spear and it went through it’s throat and the snake choked then wanted to take some air from the wind but it fell to the ground. Simon said “stay back stay back” to Ben “I've said it once and I'm going to say it again, Man I love being a turtle”

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