After work at 9:02 Mary sat comfortably in her fancy car and started driving, her motor roared like a lion as she drove out of the parking lot, went down the motorway heading to the bridge. When she got to the start of the bridge Spiderman, started jumping over buildings getting a better view of Mary's safety, At that moment a Dirt truck intersected into Mary's lane just in front of her, But suddenly the trucks tire loosened, and hit Mary's car which bowled into the side of the bridge, Mary couldn't move out of fear, her car creaked and leaned back and forth.
Spider Man was already on the bridge trying his hardest to get Mary to safety. The vehicle leaned ford, to far and slipped off the bridge. Mary jumped out of the car and tried to land in the water safely, Spider Man leaped down his eyes widened as she got closer and closer to the water. He sprang out a web trampoline and attached it underneath the bridge, Mary bounced on the web, then came spiderman, he landed feet first, he was so quick he had already clenched to Mary and jumped up on the bridge, when they got to the top he put her down carefully Mary asked “who are you?” Spiderman said with confidence “I'm Spiderman!”.
Will she be saved? Yes
Amazing story and descriptions - worth re-reading before you publish to make sure your capitals and lower case letters are in the right place:)
ReplyDeleteI am very glad that Spiderman saved her!
Love Mum